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发表于 2014-6-9 21:54:53
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1 i can not afford anything cost much 改为 i can not afford to buy anything cost much。cuz afford means having the fanancial to do something or to buy something.) p; r4 X3 s" `7 z
2.by the end of the last December. by the end 是固定搭配 。
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3.i got the problem again.用 get 或者 have 都行。
. P1 ]- ~) |3 A. U" m# j$ g, `4.by the end of the last December , i got the problem again ,but i am not such someone being afraid of figuring out a crazy idea.没太看懂这句您想表达什么。
; x" E. h) U" z3 N第一段大概就这些小细节 ，您写得很不错 对于初学者来说，孰能生巧加油，另外 在英翻界有句话 就是十句汉译英才能出来一句英译汉 也就是多精读 多翻译 才能纠正中式思维。一点小建议，共勉。 |
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楼主: changkongceyi
发表于 2013-1-14 11:55:18
